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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
Hey! First of all, I'd like to hand you a bucket full apologies. I realise how long this review has taken me and I do understand if you hate me for it. School has just cruel! If my career wasn't on stake here then I wouldn't have taken so much subjects.

Any who, moving on! I'm shocked that this is your first ship! Normally, people would start writing ships first and them they move on to the stories without ships. Mhm. I wouldn't say you went the 'wrong way' because technically, there is no such thing. Every author has some place to start with and yours was just different from what I've seen is all.

If it helps, I think you did a fantastic job. You seriously don't have to worry that much about the story! I love it! When I saw the thick paragraphs I knew that it would be, no doubt, an awesome story and guess what, I was right. :P

Unlike some of of the reviewers, I didn't have trouble reading the story. I followed it quiet well and I think that's all because of your awesome descriptions.

The chapter was, overall, well-written. I like Tonks' character here. She seems such a lovely young warrior. She's very observant, like any other member of the order should be, and she has a long span attention. I love the way that she's a balance person, she's not that arrogant, she doesn't radiate too much confidence, and she thinks about things. Mhm. I might as well say that I love her.

Ooh! The wolf part for Remus was quiet interesting as well. Its very rare to see things like that. I think its because some, if not most, of the authors are afraid to invent new theories and things and they just want to stick to the more familiar side and sometimes it does get boring.

Yeah, I just went totally off topic! In any case, I love your story! Woop! 1000/10

Ta-ta for now,
CloakAuror9 xx

Author's Response: Apologies? Pssh don't even worry about that :) I know the feeling - school is driving me crazy currently! :P

Haha - yes I've noticed! It's just weirdly not something I've ever done - so first time for everything! :P

Oh! Thank you so much! Yeah - I completely agree, Tonks is awesome! One of the best characters in the series (except Ron and Luna of course :P)

Meh, off topic is good :D

Thanks so much for the great review! :)

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