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Review:PrancingPoetry says:
Really enjoyed that! Loved the banter, protective Weasleys, battle scenes and all of it in general! I don't know if you realised it, but you used two, kinda three cliches of Dramione- the masked ball, the head boy/girl, and the private dorm...but you didn't use them really in the development of the relationship (which I loved the irony of- they didn't get together because they were thrown together, or didn't know who each other was... they got together because they fell in love! Dur!) In all, I loved the...normality...of the relationship if ya get what I mean-they had fights e.t.c.-it felt very real, and refreshing after so many badly written cliches (nothing wrong with a good old cliche, just badly written ones!)
Only Complaints:
1. Lucius Malfoy was a bit of an evil bastard! Thought he was a little more cowardly in the book and Draco didn't seem to give a damn about his death...whys??? I need more detail!!!
2. There are more Blacks that were good...e.g Andromeda..but to be fair Hermione probably didn't know about most of them..probably only knew about Andromeda and Sirus
3. Cliffhanger...ohhh--you--you! I presume its marriage though, what he has planned? ;)
4. Ohh it was too awesome! ;D
I think you're right no one with a SOUL could kill off Ron..hes too awesome...How JKR could kill (sob) FRED I have no idea...keep writing :D EA xx
PS-mistake in Seamus reconcilliation (i know big words too :D) scene "you actually slap me!" "Should be slapped..sorry for finishing on a downer :(
PSPS: I'm writing a Dramione too at the mo... do you find writing Non-Canon difficult? x

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