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Review:Elenia says:
Awww, you made me cry! This was so emotional and beautiful.

I just can't get over how perfect and detailed your descriptions are! They made this so intriguing to read! And I wanted to continue reading and then realised that this was a one-shot and couldn't so now I'm sad. But happy at the same time because this really was a very complete story and doesn't need to be continued. It's just your writing style; it makes me want to keep on reading!

The whole idea was very believable. That was definitely something that could have happened, to be away on a mission on Christmas. It made this so sad, but so real at the same time. I wanted to shout to Dumbledore for being so heartless that he separated a father from his little baby boy d:

I love the characters; they are so true and authentic. The interaction between James and Sirius is just flawless and so fun to read. And I love how you included Remus into this too; they would be concerned about their mate. Oh and the pink blanket! It was just perfect.

Ending this story with Lily's POV was great. It was nice to see that she was

I don't have any words left to describe, so you can just imagine that I've written a really long review and used every single word that describes how perfect this story was!

And now I'm sad because ten is the biggest grade I can give this. It deserves at least an eleven and some golden stars. Oh and applauds, yes, definitely! Can you hear me clapping? (:


Author's Response: You are the most wonderful person in the world. THANK YOU!

You've read my WIP and you know how different this is from my other story. I was so ridiculously nervous about this, but your feedback is wonderful, and honestly, I am so, so, so, so, so, SO glad that you like it ^_^ It mean a lot to me.

Thanks for the review. This was my first one-shot EVER, and so hear that you liked it so much is wonderful :D

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