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Review:Pixileanin says:
You really had a perfect end to the story here. Very fitting. I particularly loved the scene with John and Daisy and the friends that they had kept in touch with over the years. You wrapped up all your story lines nicely and it all led into canon so very well.

My favorite part had to be this:

"John smiled as she looked up at him with her bright green eyes, he always tried to be impartial and never have a favorite daughter, but Lily made it so hard sometimes. "

This really speaks to John's character as a father, his pride and his love for his daughter. It only takes little touches like this to bring life into your characters, and I think you have succeeded with each of your characters throughout this tale.

The style you chose for this piece has a real nostalgic feel to it, which is just perfect for this type of story. I was thoroughly entertained. Congratulations on finishing a truly impressive story!

Author's Response: You made it to the end!

Glad you thought the ending worked, I'm guessing mosr people put 2 and 2 together about who John and Daisy were a long time ago, but in case they didn't this might be a twist.
I imagined John was probbaly closer to Lily than Petunia, which I think would explain a lot.

Thanks a lot for the reviews!

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