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Review:Miss Muggle says:
Interesting first chapter! I wonder why Petunia's going to Hogwarts? And how Lily reacts to being invisble?
This chapter is a bit confusing. But I'm sure everything that happened will be explained more in later chapters?
My only complaint is that some of the parapraphs are large chunks of text. It would be nice if they were broken up a bit more.
Overall, I think this is a really good first chapter.

Author's Response: Hello! Thank you for the lovely review. Yes, it is a bit confusing :) But it will all become clear. Thanks for your advice! Glad you liked it.

LWG :D


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