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Review:Elenia says:
Hi! Elenia here with you review!

Is this your first fanfic ever? I think it's a really promising start for a story!

I liked the very beginning a lot! A great way to capture attention! The chapter otherwise was very short so we didn't get to learn a lot about the plot or the characters, but I'll forgive it since this is just the first chapter! I can't wait to see where this is going (:

But for the parts that were there, I think your writing was very good! I didn't see any grammar problems, the dialogue worked well and it flowed.

Keep up the good work! (:

Author's Response: Yes, this is my first. :) Thank you.

I know it was really short, but the next should be validated today, and its longer.

Thank you, I was worried about the grammar. :)

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