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Review:Moonyxluna says:
I loved the part about the alarm clock running away from Tonks. Just a little thing, but it was really cute.
Aw, I love Tonks. I didn't even realize it was her in the first chapter, but it makes complete sense :) A clumsy Hufflepuff.

I like how you included her metamorphic abilites, but it wasn't shoved in the readers mind, you just mentioned it casually because her friend was bothered by her hair. I usually see how she changes her hair randomly just because she can, so it was nice to see it not over-used :) (I hope that makes sense..)

I may have just missed it, so forgive me for asking, but why was Marcia sick?

Great chapter! This is a really neat story :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! I'm so glad that you enjoyed Tonks in this chapter- she's a great character to write, especially at this age.

I'm glad that you enjoyed how I included her metamorphic abilities in this chapter- I wasn't intending it to be "in your face" because I don't think Tonks would use her ability in that manner. It's a natural part of her- I don't think that she would view it so much as an amazing and unique talent but rather as something she's always had.

I never included why Marcia was sick- when I was writing it I imagined that it was an ordinary, run-of-the-mill sickness- probably the flu or a simple stomach bug. Even though they're minor, they still manage to make you feel absolutely awful!

I'm glad that you're enjoying the story!

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