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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
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Wow this story may have been short but it definetely made an impact! I like the way you framed it as a flashback of Sirius looking back on it when he's facing death himself. Since he said in the books that it was "easier than falling asleep," this helps give some perspective as to what helped him face death that way.

I liked the insights we were able to get into Win's character even though she didn't seem to have that big of a role. It seemed like she had a lot of spirit and could definetely keep up with Sirius and even put him in his place sometimes.

Southern France is definetely the perfect setting for a wedding, and the descriptions really brought across the feelings of happeness they must have been experiencing, and enjoying being away from the war for a few days. Having the Death Eaters show up there really shows just how pervasive their reach was, and the fear and uncertainty that people would have had to live with during the first war. While her fate was sad, it was also expected. I think Sirius is similar to James Bond in the way that anybody he gets attached to will inevitably end up hurt in one way or another.

And then the last lines tied everything togther by showing how Sirius helped inspire Harry to face his fate. Great job!

Author's Response: Wow thanks! I'm glad it fit well with the Sirius you know and that you were able to pick up the subtle bits I threw in there of how his death affected Harry and his acceptance of his fate. Sirius is one of those people who feels that they bring doom to those around them, though we know that that isn't necessarily true. Thank you for this!

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