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Review:MyMyMiss says:
O.o And the fun begins ^_^

Boy oh boy, and this is only 2 chapters? Why is this only 2 chaptes there should be more chapters - many many more chapters.

You have such a unique writing Style. You know how to describe things without making your readers bored and skip half and paragraph but more so we can't look away incase we miss a tiny little detail. Kudo's on that.

I only picked up on a few things in this chapter - the first was in this line
- All she had to do know was find out why - know should be now.
And this line.
-“Were you not listening,” he lies and I can’t be with a liar, because I find it hard to trust them. I can’t fully trust Draco, Ginny. Besides, I don’t even know if he likes me.” - You have an extra " after listening.

But apart from that this is a great first chapter into a great short story.

~Karni. xx

Author's Response: I've always planned on going back and editing this, I don't know why I haven't yet. *adds it to the list*

Thank you so much!

Sam. :D

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