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Review:atellam says:
Hey there! I'm here with your review :)

First up, have you had this beta'd? I'd be happy to beta it for you if you haven't. I offer because 1) I actually like the story and 2) because to point out the grammar errors etc. of this sorta took up way too much room in the review.

Anyway, onto the other stuff. :D
I loved this. Angst is wonderful, and this was perfect. Never having read a Tom/Minerva, i might have to go and hunt some good ones out, because this was inspiring :P

One-shot, so there wasn't much to the plot, but what there was, was brilliant.

Pacing was good, flow also.

Description was wonderful and characterisation was well done.

The only things i'd have a look at are the formatting and the grammar/punctuation. But as I said, you can get a beta for that (and I'm happy to help out if you want, just shoot me a PM.)

Anyway, well done. I saw this was for a challenge and I hope you do great! Keep up the amazing writing,
- Adele :)

Author's Response: Sorry for the last response!
No, I do not have a beta for this story and I would be so grateful if you could beta this story *scurries off to send you a PM*

I love writing Tom/Minerva! I always love the idea that Tom used to love once; before he became Voldemort.

The results, unfortunately, never came out for the challenge but thank you anyway for such an amazing review!

I shall send you a PM now!!
Jaz


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