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Review:forsakenphoenix says:
This is fantastic! Your characterizations are wonderful and the plot is so fascinating. I'm really in love with your Lysander, and I couldn't help but think fondly of him throughout the chapter, especially when Harry was giving him a little pep talk. Harry's faith in him is endearing and I'm glad Lysander is trying to ignore the hurtful rumors about his failures as an Auror. :(

Hugo sounds kind of...hot, if that's okay to say, haha! Just from your description, I can understand Lysander's feelings of attraction. I love how he gets caught checking Hugo out too. I can only imagine what they'll get up to "bonding."

The little appearance of Luna was great and you still brought her quirkiness from canon but made her more mature and motherly, which was a great contrast to read about it.

I can't wait to read more of this and I'm super excited it's finished so I don't have to wait for updates. :)

Author's Response: Ah, I love my Lysander! He's just so cute and sweet and shy. LOL. Yes, he tries to ignore the rumors.

Hugo changed from the kid he was for reasons you shall find out about. He spent a lot of time changing himself. Which is why he looks so... Hot. LOL. Lysander is attracted for many reasons, he has been for a long time. :)

I'm glad you liked Luna, I wasn't sure how people would take to her being more mature.

I'm so glad you liked it. I'm editing the chapters now. :)


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