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Review:VioletBlade says:
Hi there, VioletBlade here with the other review you requested! :)

So... this was a bit unexpected, though it did have Rose/Scorpius in it, so I'm happy :) I was definitely seeing this ending a completely different way! (Where Rose was the good-best-friend and let the love of her life walk away) But anyway, onto the in-depth review!

Language: I will admit, it did seem to me that this was a bit rushed, even though it was 5,000 words long! I just think that it might have been better as a two-shot, because it was a lot of plot/twists that were a bit hard to wrap my head around!

Characterization: Though I am glad that they got together, I'll be honest: The way Rose let her best friend get hurt just so she could have Scorpius kind of got to me a bit. I don't think I could have done it to any of my friends, to be honest. I would have to have a long in-depth conversation with them, and, only after time, could I actually go through with it. I just find it hard to believe that their friendship could have withstood that. As for Scorpius, again, although I was rooting for him, there were parts that got to me a little. The Big One was that he did something like that to Lily. That, to me, shows real cowardice. Again, I'm not saying I'm not happy he and Rose got together, because I am!

Grammar: Not too much here!

Plot: Like I mentioned above, I think this could have been a much more successful two-shot, just because there was so much information in it. It probably could have even stretched as a short story, if I'm being honest! But it was a good story, and definitely took me by surprise at the end, but it made me happy! It was a nice little read though that brightened my spirits so thank you for requesting from me!

~VioletBlade

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for reading and reviewing! I know it was unexpected and kind of crazy, but I have edited the story now and changed the ending (which is still crazy but better) inspired by many reviews :)

Thanks a lot for all your comments!

Cheers!
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