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Review:VioletBlade says:
Hi there, VioletBlade from the forums with pt. 2 of your requested review!

I liked this chapter much better, because it finally featured Oliver (one of my most favorite characters to read about). And, I really liked your chapter because it showed us something most people don't really ever bother to show: the reason Oliver really got into Quidditch, and even him trying hard to prove himself to the others from around where he lived.

Again, there were some issues with dialogue punctuation, and some grammar issues, but nothing that couldn't be fixed with a beta, and it didn't take much away from the storyline. I hope I've been a bit helpful at least with your story, and thank you for requesting from me!

~VioletBlade

Author's Response: Hello! Thank you for your review I'm happy your like the chapter :)

I love to read about Oliver too :)


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