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Review:Hogwarts27 says:
Your love of Sci-Fi is obvioulsy showing here, and while this was a very creative Sci-Fi idea, and was basically well-written, it went so far into a far-fetched Sci-Fi realm that Hermione didn't feel anything like herself at the end. You changed her by adding an external Sci-Fi element to her life rather than by bringing out a facet of her internal canon character, which I thought was what the theme prompt was essentially after when I went back to check it. Ultimately you focused more on developing the Sci-Fi details of this story than you did on showing us a character's inner attributes. Ron's romantic language felt quite out of character too - in fact he struck me as the better character study, expressing this more romantic side of his character than Hermione was. This story struck me more as being a development of a Sci-Fi plot rather than a study of a character's inner qualities, so I'm not so sure you actually fulfilled what the theme prompt was aiming for with this piece.

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