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Review:HarrietHopkirk says:
OH MY GOD ASDFGHJKL; THIS IS REALLY VERY PRETTY!

The opening is very, very beautiful - obviously Lily and Petunia are named after flowers, and you have used the metaphor so wonderfully. A thick waxen surface and a delicate frill of a petal – always, there were differences. One from seeds and the other from a bulb – maybe their differences had always been encompassing. (Please note that this review will probably just contain squees and flails and a lot of quoting :D)

The section about the roses was also really pretty as it shows Petunia's dislike for the extraordinary: her dislike of the 'sparkling' roses and the fairytale colours of the others - fairytales, magic, la de dah. I also love your use of present tense: it's my favourite tense to write and you do it so well! Gahhh...

Basically, this is awesome. The descriptions and the imagery and the emotions and the characters are all there and it's a wonderful pile of luscious writing. Really, you've done so well.

Congratzzz! 10/10

Author's Response: In my mind I'd like, totally gone way overboard with the whole Lily/Petunia lets-talk-about-flowers again, so I'm glad you thought it was artsy and pretty rather than just excessive. It's good to know :)

Eee! Thank you so much for this lovely squee-flail-y reviewy type things. Ah, thank you so much. This review, in itself, is very pretty.

Thanks :D

-AC

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