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Review:Elenia says:
Hey, Elenia here with your review!

I love reading about Remus and Tonks since they are one of my favourite couples, so I'm looking forwards to how you are planning on getting them together (: I think both of them were written very well, they were believable and very similar to their canon character. As were many others too. I liked the cryptic Dumbledore and the grumpy protective Moody. I think maybe Snape was the only one who was a bit off. I think his comments should maybe be a bit more proud and smug, and not so easily provoked?

I think the chapter was a good start for this story. Not much happened, but you gave us little hints to where this tale is going. So I'm sure the chapters to come will hold more action in them.

I liked the beginning of the chapter and how you didn't give information about every single character around the table, that would have been too much, but you kept up the interest. and it held through the whole chapter I think. So good job on that.

Not so much to say yet about the R/T 'ship as we didn't get any that kind of vibes from the two of them yet, but I think you are heading in the right direction. I hope you will come to re-request when your next chapter is out! (:

Author's Response: Thank you very much :) The next chapter is in the queue! I completely agree about Snape - I was so eager to get it in the queue that by the time I looked over it, it was too late :P

I've edited it now so hopefully it'll be up soon! Thanks so much for the review :)


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