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Review:DracoFerret11 says:
Okay...so this is actually DarkRose from the forums...and you're getting this review MONTHS late for your win in the One-Shot, Title, Ship, Rating Challenge. I can't believe that I forgot, but I'm going to make it up to you by doing this review now! :]

Okay! Well...I thought this was a brilliant one-shot. It was very well-written and incredibly impressive for the gravity of what you were taking on.

I don't read much slash, but this is probably one of the better ones I've seen. You wrote all the characters beautifully. I was especially impressed with Pansy. She seemed incredibly realistic and I love the twist that you took, making her just pretend to be stupid and really quite aware of the situation she's in.

I love the different dream sequences you worked with. I think they each enhanced the story in a different way and made it believable to readers. I think your descriptions of everything really brought the characters and story to life and I admit myself impressed.

The line, "I may be hard on the outside, but when it comes down to it, Iím just like her. Just a girl who wants someone who doesnít want her back." was absolutely brilliant. It really shook me. I think you did a terrific job summing up the story there. That could even be a summary! It's quite well-done. :]

So, great, great job! I loved it. I think you did wonderfully.

--Emily

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