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Review:DracoFerret11 says:'s me again. And I want you to know that I feel like crying! Just...ugh. The end of this just makes me want to cry. I hate it! I hate it. Just...ugh. I'm so upset. :[ You have no idea. So...I'm gonna talk about lines in this chapter that made me ridiculously impressed:

1. "I had... considered, reconsidered and concluded."

2. "I wanted so badly to reach out and grab her hand, to pull her back, to ask her not to leave. Not like this."

3. "We were meant to be more than friends. Sometimes it takes the sudden realisation of how incredibly ignorant and stupid one can be before you realise how much you want to hold on to the one person youíre letting go of."

Those So many lines in this chapter were incredible and ending with the Snow Patrol lyrics was perfection. Those lines stood out though. I guess we'll talk about your concerns though, then I'll go back to gushing:

Characterization: I can't describe how wonderful this was in this chapter. Getting both their points of view and seeing how different things were and how very, very similar was incredible. I actually felt really, really sad for both of them. Things just...didn't work out yet. And that's awful, but this was so well-written that I really don't have comments about that. I'm impressed. All the characters were flawless here.

Interactions: they're the best friends I've seen written in a very long time. I don't know if I've added this story to my favorites yet, but if I haven't, this chapter sealed it. I nearly cried when they were talking on the pitch together. Just...ah, perfection. No words.

Believability: positively flawless. This chapter, with its many twists and "almosts" was so realistic that it elicited real emotions from me, as I've mentioned. I swear! My heart actually ACHES right now! That's ridiculously impressive.

Flow and pace: fine. Wonderful. Take your pick. I'm still reeling from everything this chapter made me feel.

Back to gushing: it was incredible, it really was. I can't believe that this is simply fanfiction. I hope that you do something more than this in your writing career; I can easily see myself reading a book that can show emotions like these. I am so, so impressed. You've done a beautiful job here and my only fear is that the following chapters won't make me feel the same way. I truly hope they do. Great job. I'll read chapter eleven ASAP.


Author's Response: Emily, you've officially stunned me speechless with this review! I am SO overwhelmed by all your praise! Oh my GOSH!!! *blushing insanely*
You have no idea what it means to me to hear all this. That you can feel what they feel and you are with them in that moment! I can't believe what I'm reading! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU SO MUCH!
Oh God what else can I say!?? This was a beautiful heartfelt and amazing review and its reviews like these that make me battle forward with this story through writer's block and through... everything.
I share my writing here because it's my escape. I love it and I sometimes sit and write letting it all just flow, sometimes i write pages before leaving it because it was just a good ride for me, and a place to take a break from real life and escape it. In fact Caprice's first chapter, started that way. A moment when I wanted to take a breather and I just sat down and started writing. That's why no matter how many people tell me this story should have a better start I cant bring myself to scratch it because that's where it all started :)
I am truly sorry if the following chapters let you down, but I hope you believe in them enough to know these moments will return at some point. I am humbled by all your wonderful memorable and thoughtful compliments and I am so glad I came by to ask this story to be reviewed because hearing a story be appreciated like this is the height of glory for the anonymous authour :)
Thank you once more Emily, for showing such love for my work.
Till next time.

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