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Review:Pixileanin says:
Schwartz has quite the sense of humor. Haha! They have yeti! Who could loose with yeti on their side??? That should have been a slam dunk for them.

I loved the description you had of Patton. Seemed right fitting. Then we finally get to see Roger flying. I was hoping he'd get to do something significant soon. Your description of the bombed town was also well done. Pictures of towns just like that right after WWII were really disturbing. My mother had stories...

Awww, and the yeti didn't make it. It's sad when people don't use their resources properly. Too bad they couldn't be captured and used against the other side. That would have been cool. (I have a soft spot for fuzzy things, forgive me.) But Schwartz has surprised himself, so it turned out alright in the end. You had some great action in this chapter, with a few surprises thrown in. Lovely!

Author's Response: Well Scwartz thinks he's funny, most people don't agree haha. Although it is a bit humorous that Wolfgang von Wolfsburg isn't a werewolf i will admit

I definetely wanted to work Patton in, although I watered him down just a little bit to keep things 15+

Yeah its too bad the yeti wasnt well used. I was considering giving the yeti a bigger role, but it was a little too epic for me to handle haha. (The original outline had Will Reynolds getting killed by the yeti in this chapter, but he earned a reprieve)

Thanks a lot for reviewing!

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