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Review:Pixileanin says:
I love these brief moments between John and Daisy. It doesn't take much to paint the blooming relationship between them. Very well done!

Churchill had great lines in his scene! One of them had an asterisk by it, but there wasn't anything in the Author's Note to explain that. Was it a quote from somewhere? I loved that it was Muriel that showed up too.

Grindelwald certainly has a temper. I wouldn't have wanted to report anythingt o him either! No wonder Dietrich was so cautious. And it was funny to read about MacDonald on the broom.

Your descriptions of the Alps panorama and then pulling back into the conference room with Hitler was really well done here. Smooth! And flowy! And the action rolled on. Nice work!

Author's Response: Hey again!

Yeah I think John and Daisy are pretty much perfect for each other. Glad you like them togther!

The Churchill scene was so fun to write. A couple of those quotes were things he actually said, and ooops I fogot to write the author's note I was planning to.

Grindelwald definetely int ssomebody you want to bring bad news to haha.

Glad you liked the last scene! I've been to the mountains in Germany once and it was breathtaking.

Thanks a lot for reviewing!

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