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Review:forsakenphoenix says:
I love kissing in the rain and happily ever afters, so I was totally a-okay with that ending!

I felt so bad for Hugo in the beginning, to have to watch the man he loves pretend to be with his sister, to mislead friends and family for years. It must hurt to never be acknowledged and I am totally behind his decision to walk away. I think that's what Scorpius needed - a swift kick in the rear.

I love that Rose and Scorpius are best friends, though, and she can just tell him that he needs to admit his feelings for Hugo. Then Teddy outing them after his speech! I actually didn't even think that he would have known about their relationship so that was a pleasant surprise.

Scorpius's little comment about how they were close, just wrong sibling made me smile. I think Hugo's anger at first was justified, but I'm glad he didn't hold onto it any longer so that him and Scorpius could just kiss and make up. I giggled when his mother fainted at his declaration, though. Of course.

I really enjoyed this. I think you did a great job dealing with Hugo's hurt that Scorpius wasn't acknowledging their relationship, and later with a sensitive topic like Scorpius outting himself to his family and proclaiming his love for Hugo. Well done. :)

Author's Response: Yay! It's for a challenge and kissing in the rain was essential. :D

It is definitely what Scorpius needed. Yes, no one is allowed to tell Scor what to do except for Rose... And Hugo. Teddy had to know; he's Hugo's "big brother" figure. Albus has James, Hugo has Ted. Plus I love him, so he needed a big role. :D

Thank you so much for reviewing this fic!

Sam.

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