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Review:starryskies55 says:
Aw.
It's the CHALLENGE-MASTER, by the way.
I really liked this, the way you've done the flashbacks is very good and Rory's feelings.
You've got some spelling/grammar mistakes, but that can be overlooked by the general awwwness of it and the priceless family moments. It's very believable for him to reflect on his life, and I'm so glad that he was reunited with his dad. I totally didn't expect this when I said "death eaters" as your plot point, but it was brilliant. Did he survive the battle? *hopeful smile*

Author's Response: Wow thank you so much. As I said before, when you gave me the details, this just popped into my head. I totally enjoyed writing this and if you set another challenge after this one, please please pm me. I will be one of your first entrants.
I am so glad you enjoyed it. And many thanks for allowing me to broaden my writing horizons and skills by exploring new ground.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing.


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