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Review:louise_loves_hp says:
Hey there
I only got a couple of lines in till the emotions behind your words hit me. They are what pulled me in the story.
I like that you could see that Draco feels that rethought what he has missed(but also left) and doesn't know key details of what has happened in Hermione's life, in the pass four years.
The strong Hermione that we know from the books was here but you could tell that she had grown up but she was still had her.I love how Draco was so blunt thought out this story.
It was nice to see that you used the words about loving Harry but when you got into the flash back she used them on Draco. This really hits you that it was a big blow to him. I believe that this is a really good way to start the flow you had.
Also your writing is powerful when with the emotions. I can feel them with the way that you write your characters but also its the feels you get from it.
Harry was great with Cadence and I believe that I really could see him stand by Hermione in this, its a very possible story.
I really thought at the end of the first flash back she was going to run off with Draco but I loved that she got the ending she wanted but I also got the feeling she was second guessing herself at the same time.
Louise

Author's Response: Hi!
Wow, thank you!
I love writing stories where characters rethink their mistakes and attempt to "atone" them if you will.

Yay for getting characterisation right! I'm always so worried about it but I think that I got it good with this one.

I'm glad that I got the emotion across well! I loved writing Harry, he was fun and surprisingly easy.

Haha, I was sick of reading stories where the girl runs away with the guy in the end after he treated her badly so I wanted to write a real-life, down-to-earth story with mixed emotions and everything.
Thank you for such an amazing review!
Jaz


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