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Review:forsakenphoenix says:
You have a distinct style of writing that's very formal. It almost reads as a historical novel, which adds to the credibility of this story. It's really quite excellent.

I love all the characters you're introducing to us, and the banter in the beginning between the men was really well done. I love how true to the period you are. I can only imagine how desperate they are to return to safety and finally eat real food, only to be criticized upon their return for being dirty. I half wished Evans did say something to Whittington, the pig.

I'm excited to see their reactions when they find out what their mission is!

I really liked how you ended this from Dumbledore's POV, and including that memory of Grindelwald and showing how uncaring he is, really gives us an idea of what we're dealing with as an enemy. It's really great.

This story is so unique and I'm loving every bit of it. I'm glad to see it's finished - hopefully I can get around to reviewing all the chapters soon!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the review! I really tried to be historically accurate, so its great to hear that its coming off that way.

Whittington is so annoying, he's basically Percy Weasley on steroids.

It was definetely a good feeling to get this finished, and I'm glad you've enjoyed it so far.

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