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Review:forsakenphoenix says:
That's one of my favorite Carrie Underwood songs! I think it really suits this story very well and adds to the overall feeling of grief and heartbreak. You did an excellent job describing Angelina's feelings in regards to Fred's death.

I love how they both were watching out for each other during the battle. But I can't help but wonder if Angelina will find fault in her or George for separating them, that maybe if they stuck together, nothing bad would have happened. :( I thought it was sweet that Fred took the time to find Lee to protect Angelina though - it's obvious that he cares very much for her. I loved that you added the idea of them being engaged. I think that makes Fred's death even more devastating to deal with.

Angelina's grief at the church was so palpable and it really wrenched at my heart. Incorporating the song into some of the dialogue was really clever too and tied the song into the story even more.

Wonderful job. I'm excited to read the other parts to see how this all plays out with Angelina and George.

Author's Response: Yes! I was in love with this song at the time I wrote this...and it really is one of my favorite of her songs to! I'm really glad you liked how it fit in and how the song flowed in with the story itself. I worked hard to get this story together, to ensure that the lyrics enhanced this story instead of leading the story forward. So I'm glad you liked that.

I also worked to get Fred and Angie's connection to run deeper than just words. I wanted to show that they cared, and wanted an opportunity to explore the grief of a character in that fashion. So I'm very glad you enjoyed this!

The second of the series is out, and I am actually thinking it may need to go to four parts, but it depends on which songs I find to used. But I do hope you enjoy the rest of it! This has been a fun series so far.

Thanks for the lovely review!
~Grimmerz


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