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Review:Remus says:
Hey! Perelandra here with your review! SO SORRY it has taken me forever!!! :(

But I'm here now, right? XD I'll be reviewing this as I read along.

Minerva's relationship with her father seems believable. Specially in that time period we're reading about. British men always had an issue with displaying emotions, specially towards their daughters, so kudos to you for portraying that.

“Yes, it was okay,” Minerva returned, “You?”. 'You' shouldn't he capitalized. Unless you add a period after 'returned'.

Minerva having a issue talking to someone's parents made me giggle. Such a teenager thing to feel like. However, the way you write...you make the reader feel like the parents are always the enemy here. I can see how that's 'true' from a teenager point of view as well...

I absolutely LOVE that you're doing a whole woman revolution at Hogwarts. Your fic reminds me of a TV show Downton Abbey...when it comes to women in the world and the 'shocking' things they would do. Anyway, cliffhanger in the end!

This was def. a good read! Your narration is fantastic. Details are great and not way overdone that bores the reader to sleep. And even your OCs are fun to read as well. Francesca's last line, priceless.

Feel free to re-request when I'm open once again! :D

Author's Response: NO, don't worry! Review requests take ages, I understand that, and thank you for leaving me such a lovely review. I really appreciate it :)

I am honestly terrible at punctuating dialogue, so thanks for pointing that out now. I am /aware/ of how it goes, it's just that whenever I write my hands don't seem to agree with the general grammatical conventions.

MINNIE: leader of the WOMAN REVOLUTION. Well, we'll see how that works out fo her ;)

Thanks for the lovely review! And I'll keep my eye out for the free slots :)

-AC


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