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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
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This is definetely a good way to start the story off! I remember reading Book 5 for the first time when the Order was having their meetings and Fred and George were trying to listen in with their extandable ears, it felt like we were right there with Fred and George, wishing we could hear what ws going on. So with that being said, I really enjoyed your depiction of the Order meeting, which was pretty much exactly how I would picture one happening.

The characterization was very good. I love how you Dumbledore making cryptic wise saying that most people wouldn't get, was very fitting for him. You always have Moody down very well, we can see just how paranoid and vigilent he is. As for Lupin and Tonks, they seem to be starting off just right. We can really see the pressures they are under and the responsibilities thay have with the Order, and how that situation may draw them closer togther. Seems totally believable so far.

Author's Response: Thank you very much :)

Yep this chapter is just setting the scene really, so I hope you enjoy the other chapters which will be up soon :D


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