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Review:AC_rules says:
Helo there LWG!

So your name was just lying there, temptingly alluring me to come review this chapter even though I probably should be doing something boring. Still, it was good to be back :)

I really liked this chapter! My favourite part was definately when Regulus reached out and touched her wrist. We'll bypass the fact that wrists make me feel sick (bluaojuoadoa - why do I have them?) but I just thought it was such a REAL movement that you captured. It was really, I don't know... but I could totally just visualise it.

One thing I would say is that there was this ABSOLUTELY HUMUNGOUSLY HUGE PARAGRAPH. I was reading, then I was scrolling down then I /kept scrolling down/ and it just seemed never ending and I had to stop for a minute to blink. Okay, well that's a slight exageration (it's Marlene! She brings out the crazy in me) but I think it would work better if you split the paragraph up. It's the one beginning with... 'I hate quaffles...'

I loved Xeno, btw.

It was good to be back and reading more of this story :D

-AC

Author's Response: Hey AC!

Glad you were so tempted :P Boring things are...boring. Yeah.

Wrists make you feel sick? O.o Oh dear! I love them. They connect my hands to my body which is why I'm typing this at all!

Uh oh, I apologise to your eyes for the humungous paragraph :/ I shall edit!

Thanks for a snazzgavvling review!

LWg x


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