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Review:the_edge_of_love says:
You caught my attention with that summary! Readig it, I'd say it was Bellatrix. Then, I realized I was forgetting the first lines: this is boy trouble! There's no way it would be Bella:P

So Pansy it is, right? Judging from the boyfriend's 'aloofness' in their sixth year xD

It was an interesting way to characterize her. I liked that the story is written from her POV, and we get to see what she thinks of herself. I also ennjoyed having the opportunity to look into Draco's sixth year though the eyes of someone who's near him.

The whole time I was reading it, I had a smile on my face, but the funniest part was definitely this one:
"To my dismay, I discovered there was a small blotch of ink on one of my knuckles. I gasped. These kind of things happened to that bushy-haired bucktooth Gryffindor bookworm, and I couldn't for the life of me think how on earth ink landed on my hands!"

Overall, I'd say this was a smartly written story: it was funny despite the fact that if you really think about it, it's quite ironic how Draco's being through what he's being through and she's all 'okay, whatever':P

~ Angie

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks again for your great review!

Haha, there's no way it could be Bella! Bella and boys is a no go :P

Yep it is Pansy, kudos for getting it right xx

I am glad to know that you think the characterization and narrative was good, and that it brought a smile to your face :) I love that line too btw, and I had fun writing the whole thing!

Thanks a lot for your wonderful comments! I showcased Pansy the way I pictured her and glad to know it turned out well!

thanks!


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