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Review:Moonyxluna says:
I really enjoyed this :) I love a good Remus/Tonks story, and this looks to be the start of a great one. and I love Beauty and the Beast! I never really thought of their relationship like that, but it makes perfect sense!

I think you got Remus' personallity spot on, not wanting Tonks to be in danger becasue of him. Also, Tonks, being clumsy and not wanting Moody to be in harms way because of his age.

Moody was funny to read, the one eyed, one legged man not bringing a whole lot of creditability was great :) Snape... bitter guy, Snape is. Great job with his character too.

As far as 'ship', I think you did great showing some attraction between the two right away. Tonks studying his exaustion and Remus being protective of her, were nice. It wasn't too overpowering for chapter one, just little hints here and there. Great job, I want to read more!!

Author's Response: Thank you :) The Beauty/Beast thing just hit me whilst I was at the Christmas Pantomine so there will be a running theme :D

Oh! Yey I'm so glad you like my characterisation! It's the main thing I'm always focussed on!

Well I'm upto Chapter 3 so more is on it's way! Thanks for the review :D


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