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Review:AriesGirl40 says:
Sounds like you had writing 101, I had it last semester, easy A. The stories were short enough. 102, same deal, just read and write and talk about what you read and wrote. hope your studying to become an engineer, you'll have NO problem finding a job once your finished. Trust me, do the time now while your mind is in the game, wait till later in life, you have no choice but to work harder for that A.
I just finished reading your whole story, aside from the spelling mistakes, I think your mind goes dyslexic after writing on a roll. I've been known to do the same thing. Thats it, only thing I can say is that you might want to go thru it later and fix.
You have done a wonderful job with this story. You went thru each person in turn at different ages thru the whole thing, they acted their age. I thought that was awesome. Even when puberty hit, you could smell the hormones in the air lol You did well at keeping the readers attention. You were witty, fun and caring. I adored your sense of humor thru the story, Hogwarts should be fun.
well, enough for now. I'm off to bed, school first thing ya know...
Till next chapter I say, Well Done!

Author's Response: It was English 356 actually... Teaching Young Adult literature. The books were good and everything but a lot of reading! I was excited to read a book of my own volition after the quarter had ended lol Thank you so much for the review! I have horrible spelling I'll admit. I'm actually hoping that a miracle will occur and I will automatically become a beast at it, however I don't think it will happen :/ Alas! Thanks again!

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