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Review:Serendipity1234 says:
I love this story SO MUCH.
More moody, suspicious behavior from Al. I enjoyed that so much. He's like this huge mystery I can't wait to solve :D he's adorable and intense and confusing and kind of sassy. Lol.
I like his wit :) though I hate that he's flirting with other girls, I can't help but hope that maybe he was flirting because he's attracted to Gold's impersonation of Simon, rather than the girl herself. And that would be wonderful in a way because that would mean that he does love Gold :) but it would unfortunately also probably mean that he would fool himself into thinking that he doesn't actually like Gold that much. Like more than other girls. And he may think that she's just one of the many girls he may become attracted to. Or possiblly get confused over his own feelings and not come to the realization that he likes her :P
That would be SO annoying...
But I'm really hating the plan. More than ever before. Scorpius is such a sweetheart and I just know that you threw in some foreshadowing in there...I don't know whether to take it seriously of skeptically, though. I really hope that Gold gets on his good side or something so he doesn't completely hate her for being so mean... And it's so annoying that the team is all so nice and they'll all probably end up hating her and Al won't trust her and...ah! I'm dreading it. But also oddly looking forward to it...I mean that will obviously be huge. And wherever Al and Gold are I. Their relationship when that happens, it will definitely test their feelings for each intense, lol.
I think I know why Scorpius is being weird :D he's after Rose!! He's looking in the library and the Gryffindor common room -that's so adorable. He has a little crush :) or maybe a big crush...I'm looking forward to seeing how Gold gets involved in that. She's definitely proven herself to be a sneaky one :)

I really can't wait for more! Please update soon?!?!?!

Author's Response: Hello again!

And I love your reviews SO much! :P

I love the way you try and dissect Al. I can tell you this -- the next chapters to come leading up to the the Gryffindor vs. Slytherin match -- they're going to drive you crazy. :P

Well, I won't say if Scorpius will get mad at Gold for The Plan, but I will say that no matter what, he can never HATE his sister, if that's any consolation to you!

And as for Scorpius acting weird...that'll be explained in the next chapter. ;)

Hope you like what's to come! :)

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