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Review:forsakenphoenix says:
I thought I had read this before, but obviously not. Like all of your writing, this is beautiful and a wonderful glimpse into these characters we don't get to see very often in canon.

I think my favorite part of this is when they're leaving the house as an unbreakable chain and then they make the daisy chain - I don't know, the repetition of something linking them together...it's really powerful.

I love your characterizations of each Black sister - Bella as the bossy, know-it-all older sister, Andy is slightly cautious but still curious and adventurous, and little Cissy who just wants to be included with her older sisters. The glimpses we get of their mother through the small details you included also reveals a lot about their upbringing and I really appreciated getting that without dragging it on into some long, boring expose of what it's like to grow up as a Black.

This was such a great little moment that I enjoyed reading. I hope you update soon and give us more glimpses into the lives of the Black girls as they grow up, to see the moments that shaped them into the women they were as adults. :)

Author's Response: The lack of knowledge that we have about them was partially what prompted me to try and write this, to try and begin to understand the very, very complicated Black family. :P

I like having the idea of all of them linked and bound to each other when they're young... because as we know, the bonds are broken once they're older. :(

I did want them to reflect a bit who they would become, though obviously they're different as children - still, I think that the basics would be there.

Thank you! :) I'm actually really excited about this, because I recently replotted everything and I actually have a /plan/ this time! (kind of a big deal) The next chapter should be put in the queue shortly. Thank you for the review! ♥

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