Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:GryffindorGirl17 says:
Wow, that was a spin. I love the emotion James had for Sirrah and how Sirrah pushed Leighton out of the way. The only part I didn't like was when James said:
I couldn’t even believe that such an awful thing could happen to such a beautiful girl.

I can’t even describe the damage that damned bludger did to her pretty face.

What if she wasn’t the same after this?

What if she wasn’t beautiful anymore?
He just sounds really vain in this scene, like the only reason why he liked her was because she was good looking and that if she weren't good looking then he wouldn't like her anymore. Otherwise it was a good twist.

Author's Response: Hmm... that is a valid point. I guess James could be seen as vain for feeling that way... that's probably not good... err... I don't know what to say to that... hm... you've stumped me. He is a teenage boy though... who thinks he's in love with her although he really doesn't know her at all so... yeah... I don't know. He's also very dramatic, and sometimes gets carried away...

I am glad you liked James' emotion though along with the bit where Sirrah pushed Leighton out of the way! She's a good friend like that, you know. Thanks for the review!

xxEnigmaticEyes16

Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Submit Report:  





All stories remain the property of their authors and must not be copied in any form without their consent. This is an unofficial, not for profit site, and is in no way connected with J.K. Rowling, Scholastic Books or Bloomsbury Publishing or Warner Bros. It is not endorsed by any of the aforementioned parties. Rights to characters and their images is neither claimed nor implied. The use of photographs and/or the likeness of any person contained herein does not imply endorsement of any kind. Any depictions were obtained through publically available sources and therefore fall under fair use. Although we may provide links to other websites, we are not responsible for any material at these sites. You acknowledge that you link to these other websites at your own risk. All original administrative content is copyright of the site owner and must not be copied in any form (electronic or otherwise) without the prior consent of the siteowner. ©2000-2012 Fanfictionworld.net

[terms of service] [report abuse] [privacy policy] [site credits]
 
 

navigation

home

search HPFF
read stories
write stories
login/register
get help
site links
forums
podcasts
Terms of Service
Site Rules
contact us

  
 
 

categories & genres

Genre:
- crossover
- drama
- fluff
- general
- horror/dark
- humor
- mystery
- romance
- action/adventure
- angst
- au
- young adult

Popular Pairings:
- harry/ginny
- ron/hermione
- james/lily
- draco/hermione
- more...

Format:
- one-shot
- short story
- novella
- novel
- short story collection
- songfic

  
 
 

quick links

my account
ToS
random story
site rules
help
merchandise


  
 
 

fanfictionworld.net