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Review:TheGoldenKneazle says:
Hey there! *team blue*

I love how you added so much more to Mary's character in this. It works well, you slowly building up a more detailed characterisation of Marlene's friends, and I liked seeing more of Mary's motivations and reasons for mood fluctuations ie. Her sister Marcia doing that to her.

I also love your backstory for Marlene and Regulus; he seems pretty darn callous right now, but I really want to read more about them - why they broke up, why they got together, why he's moved onto Marcia. I think it's a great plot point, too!

I love this, can't wait to read more!
~Lottie

PS. I loved your little worry-rant in the AN, so glad you found it again! *hands chocolate*

Author's Response: Hi lottie!

Sorry it took me a while to respond to your review, I've been busy :(

Thank you! I'm pleased Mary doesn't seem to unrealistic...or does she...I don't know!

Regulus, Smegulus...Not entirely sure I've written him right, but I'm happy you enjoyed it!

*takes chocolate and hands back ice cream :P*

~annon x


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