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Review:Sanni says:
I like the idea of the plot so far, I'm thrilled to find out what else there will be!

Just a couple of things I want to say. In case you are going to go through this story and make some corrections, you should pay attention how to spell some things, eg. then vs than, a lot vs alot. Also, when a name is mentioned in the dialogue, you are supposed to add a comma; eg. in the beginning of the story Malfoy says “Argh, what do you want Scarhead?”. There should be a comma in between of want and Scarhead. If you speak the line aloud, you would have a tiny break there.

Good story anyway :)

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