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Review:dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap says:
Hey! I'm back for chapter three and I have to first say: Congrats! I see that this story has gone from a work in progress to completed. How exciting! I hope you have something new planned for us in the future.

I felt like this chapter was another introductory chapter but I think that was a good thing only because it's obvious you have so many more characters to introduce to us. It's clear you need to use OCs and that's always hard (in my mind) because you have to decide the traits, the characteristics of each new OC and you have to make sure they mesh well with the canon characters and if they're believable and...wow, you had a lot of work to do, didn't you? How did you keep up with all of them!

I thought the transition to Dumbledore was perfect because it showed an obvious contrast in the attitude of Dumbledore and the ones mentioned above. Oh, I didn't realize until the end of the chapter but the last names...Evans? A relation of our dear Lily or just a coincidence? Anyway, I enjoyed Dumbledore's part because this seems to be the push into the next part of the story. Now things are going to start to happen, we'll get to see more of the war and I can't wait to find out how you write that out.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot, it was definetely a great feeling to finish this.

I'm trying to stay as canon as possible and not have crazy time traveling and everything, so obviously i had to use mostly OC's given the lack of availible characters. I also really wanted to tie in Dumbledore's story with the bigger picture of what was going on in the world at the time.

With how complex everything was I pretty much had to use the first few chapters to set things up before things really start happening. Oh, and John Evans' name is probably not a coincidence haha.

Thanks for the review!

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