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Review:The Singer in White says:
Sooo, funny story about this review - I have too many tabs up in my browser, not enough sleep in my system, and I totally just posted this review in another story that dealt with Sirius's snarkiness and depression in Grimmauld. Humiliating much? XD. But the author hasn't updated that story in ages, so hopefully nothing will come out of it.

Now onto your review...

You know, I've gotta say that you write by far THE most charming version of Sirius that I have ever seen. And I love you for it dearly.

I'm trying my hand at a Sirius/OC story, and I love bouncing ideas off of other people and getting their opinions. With Sirius's characterization, I don't have anyone to do that with. I've got one person offline that knows I write this stuff, but her view of Sirius is so ridiculously biased that I can't get anything from her (she also has a ridiculously jaded view of boys aged 16-21. I don't think that sort of thing should cloud your judgment when you're trying to fill in the blanks for a character from popular lit for fun and catharsis, but anyway...). I've got virtually no one to bounce my ideas off of, so I end up trolling this site to see what other people have done. I was feeling pretty off because I sort of forgot I couldn't talk with said friend about my ideas on him (and her jadedness made me depressed in general), but I found you updated and you made me smile. =) So thank you!

I'm so ridiculously sick of the 'Sirius the womanizer' view, the one where he sees girls as nothing but another notch on his bedpost. I feel here's nothing whatsoever that supports this. I love the way you portray him here though, LOVE him. He's such a swoon-worthy gentleman in this, and it appears that you've made him something of a serial monogamist, which is something that I could totally see happening (from one of my many ideas on him that I haven't quite solidified yet, as in my outlines, him and my OC aren't really interacting yet). I'm just guessing on that one though. You've got him with girlfriends and not just dates consistently in his dating history, he's a romantic, and the gossip mill finds it noteworthy that he's been single for a good portion of the year. I thought he might be a serial monogamist. XDD

Anyway, THANK YOU THANK YOU for updating this! You made me so happy, thank you! =)

Author's Response: OMG. Don't talk of such things! My Sirius is NOT that charming! SHEESH. You makin' me blush. I tried my best to portray him as I would see him from Nat's point of view, and he came out a bit of a mystery, eh? :P

Good luck on your writing!

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