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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
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i definetely like the idea behind this story, we don't really see a whole lot of Flint, and when we do he's usually a one dimensional big toothed idiot. It was nice to get to see a different side of him.

That was an interesting twist that he was only lukewarm about playing quidditch, he seemed really into the rivalry, but its believable that he would only be like that to try to get under Oliver's skin.

The end was very nice, how he was perfectly capable of winning over a girl on his own. If you wanted to add just a little more, it might help to have another paragraph or so to be a transition between the different parts, but other than that it was good.

Author's Response: Flint deserves love doesn't he :) I hate that in fanfiction he so one dimensional, I mean we could have so much fun with him.

Thank you! Though I really don't think of it as a twist even while reading the books I always thought Flint's mission was to get under Oliver's skin. Now why, we'll never know (unless someone writes a fic about it.)

It's a short one-shot and I've thought of adding to it. I'll get around it over the weekend hopefully.


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