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Review:academica says:
Yay, Tonks! :)

I'm kind of in love with your characterization here. Was it perhaps inspired indirectly by Remus? That's where my mind went, because I saw parallels between Tonks caring for her sick friend and the fact that such a personality would be necessary to help take care of Remus after his changes.

I liked seeing Tonk's reaction to the infamous "egg incident" here, especially the way you described the girl as being like a bullfrog. It was really humorous to watch it happen this way! Poor Tonks was so embarrassed, and that's so sad and funny at the same time. Again, your imagery with regard to the Slytherin's reaction was very amusing and effective.

Really nice job! I'm looking forward to getting the third point of view -- for some reason, my mind goes to Filch having to clean up the mess, although I suspect it will be Marcia. How did you get the idea for such a unique and creative story?

Wonderful job! :)

Amanda

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! I love reading your reviews!

I'm so pleased that you like my characterization that much- I have a huge smile on my face right now. I hadn't thought about the parallel between Marcia and Remus before- I had come up with the "sick friend" so as to explain why on earth Tonks would be leaving the Great Hall with eggs. It definitely seemed to fit with Tonks' character and now I can't stop thinking about the similarities between her current relationship and her future one with Remus...

I'm glad that you liked Tonks' reaction- I had a lot of fun writing it! I actually wrote her point of view before writing Marianna's. I wrote the third chapter last- and I can tell you that it's not from Filch's point of view. :)

I actually came up with this idea from a challenge on the forums- the "Multi-layered Perspective scene" create by acrules. I've always found it interesting to read about the different possible perspectives of the same scene and found it very fun to write a story that way- I'm glad that you think it's unique!

The last chapter is already in the queue- I hope that you like it!


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