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Review:BeaJerry says:
Hey! It's BeaJerry, from the forums. Since this was a One-Shot, I thought that I'd do it right away ;3
First of all, I love the scenes. I think they're romantic, but edgy, and even though they're a stereotype they're still classy, everything Rose/Scorpius is about.
But I think your scenes should have been more descriptive, and maybe explain more about their relationship. It's quite short for a One-Shot, and although it's very good, it's quite brief.
I also think you take for granted that we all know about the R/S (we need to come up with a name for them! How about Rosepius? Scose? Scorpirose? Ergh...) love/hate relationship, but maybe you should dive a bit deeper in, and describe the scenery a bit more, to really set the scene.
But overall, I think this is brilliant, and I really enjoyed reading it! 8/10.

-Bea xoxo

Author's Response: Thanks! As to the S/R thing, Scorpius is such an awkward name! haha :)

Yes, I think I could deffenintly add more detail/description. There was a detention scene in there, but I decided to cut it out. I'll probably go back and edit some more in there.
Thanks for the help! :)

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