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Review:Aphoride says:
I'm back! I know you missed me ;)
Anyway, I have to say I loved this chapter! Even though it felt a bit short (I have no idea if it was or not compared to the others, it might just have been me :P), it was really good.
Marlene as a Professor! lol. I definitely didn't expect that, and not the way you did it. I was thinking she'd have to tutor someone in something and insist on being called professor, lol, but that *points at chapter* was brilliant. Completely original and so, so funny.
The interactions with Remus and Lily were good - and I quite liked Creaky too, lol. I'm curious as to why you gave Regulus and Remus the same eyes - I've never seen that before, so it's new and exciting.
I'm a bit surprised that she's not more upset by the run-in with Regulus in this chapter, since she was obviously really upset in the last one and these two follow pretty closely, from what I understood. Although, I suppose it's perfectly possible she's trying not to think about it and putting it out of mind. Also, drowning would kinda take precedence over that, lol.

Please update - I like having a buffer of two chapters ;)
Aph xx

Author's Response: Hey Aph! You're right, I did miss you :P I don't /think/ it was short...but to be honest I haven't actually checked the word count!
I have NO idea where my insoiration for things like these come from. But obviously you like it, so I'm thankful anyway (and not scared xD). Especially Creaky, and tree language.Hmmm.

I suppose you're right. Like you said in your last review, I don't really focus as much/get the emotions right concerning Regulus. I will look over this.

Thanks so much!

LWG x


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