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Review:Aphoride says:
Ello! It's me again!
First off, I love how you've given Marlene a past relationship with Regulus. Not many people do it - it's usually that the girl's torn between the two Blacks, if Regulus even comes into it - so it was nice to see that. Also, you've portrayed it very realistically - her feelings and reactions seem very real and I can imagine doing something similar myself in that situation.
I like how you're developing the relationships between Marlene and the other people around her, like Lily and Mary. Not everyone would be friends/enemies with everyone else, and you've shown that really well.
At the moment, Regulus' character seems a little flat to me - but this is only our first glimpse of him and I'm sure we'll get to see more of him later on ;) He seems very interesting, though.
Your characterisation of Lily is, as ever, brilliant.

Keep it up! I wanna know where you go with this!
Aph xx

Author's Response: Hi Aph! I love your reviews! They always make me feel so happy :) Thank you so much! I am trying to create realistic relationships and characters, so I'm very happy you think I have.
yes, i see what you mean about regulus's character. Now I think about it, I haven't got much information about him in there at all...hmm...
Thank you
LWG x

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