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Review:xXxMagicHappensxXx says:
This is by far one of the most captivating first chapters of a Harry Potter fanfic I've ever read!

I love your writing technique and I love how much personality you give your character. So many people tend to either describe the environment AROUND their character too much, or they might be on the total opposite end of the spectrum and write too much about their character, and the characters thoughts. You however, have found the perfect balance between the two and it has been an absolute pleasure to read this chapter.

I cannot wait to read the rest of the story!

Thank you for an amazing read, I hope you make many more stories in the future

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I'm really happy you like it so much right off that bat!

I know *exactly* what you mean about there sometimes being too much environmental description or not enough. That is something that I personally work very hard at finding a good balance with, so it's really flattering to have that noticed. Sometimes with writers who I know are younger, I crave a little bit more description and not so much a laundry list of events that reads like a diary, but I know that they're still developing their voice and writing technique so I simply try to enjoy where they are in their life :)

I hope you enjoy the rest of the story just as much! I can usually guarantee that if someone likes the first chapter, they'll find it gets better and better. I hope to write lots more stories in the future, though they might not be fan fiction. I'm working on a sequel to this story, but after that I'm going to try very hard to put fan fiction aside and work on original work so maybe I can be published someday. As much as I love the Harry Potter world to death, I really never felt the longing to write about it besides from the viewpoint of Severus and Avrille. Thank you so much for your review! It is so so so very appreciated! ~Renny

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