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Review:dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap says:
Wow! Can I just say it? Can I? Yeah, Ginny? Really don't like her. This is exactly why I don't like Ginny. THIS IS THE REASON RIGHT HERE! She's so annoying. She gets angry so easily. At least Hermione listens to Jayde and asks her what happened even though she's not telling her the truth but still at least she's calm about it.

Geesh!

Besides Ginny I liked this chapter because you write such a sweet Draco. He kept making me gush at the computer screen and I almost squealed like a little fangirl but I stopped myself. Oh lord, the way he's so sweet to her I almost wish I was Jayde! I can't believe he would make his friends take an Unbreakable Vow, that's so dangerous and not to mention that but Crabbe and Goyle aren't the smartest...err...apples in the orchard. However, I don't think they would tell anyone anyway but that's a heavy vow to take.

Oh I can't wait for Harry's response. It was always quite obvious he had a crush on her and it's a bit sad that he won't get to date her. I don't think he'll understand and I think somehow her friends are going to find out and they won't be her friends any longer which is terrible but teenage pregnancy is hard. Many people who were once your friends won't stick by you. That's how it was for some girls when I was in high school. I try not to judge but anyway...next chapter? Yeah, I think you should start writing it. :D

Author's Response: !! DEEDS. !! You have officially made my LIFE with this review! I wish there were a way to give out virtual hugs, because you would be getting squished right now!!

Haha! Your first two sentences made me laugh out loud. I'm sorry you had to deal with annoying, easily-angry Ginny in this chapter! Jayde's friends will hopefully calm down a little in the next chapter, especially Ginny. *winks*

Haha! Why yes, I do write a very sweet Draco, don't I? I can't help it. I find it hard to believe that anybody who looks like THAT *Swoons* could act so mean all the time. :-) That and I've always been kind of intrigued by the character... I mean he's clearly the product of his upbringing, but I believe we saw in HBP how he can have a softer side, too... and I'm completely smitten by it!! Hehe... sometimes I gush and get all fan-girly just writing him! I kind of wish I was Jayde too (but that's sort of the point).

It's kind of crazy that he's being so sweet to her now when he was so mean, before though. But everybody gets kind of crazy when they're rejected by the one they love, right?? :-) Alas, Draco did make his friends take the Unbreakable. It kind of felt right, you know? Typical over-protective father-to-be who doesn't want his parents finding out about it yet. :P Pshh! Crabbe and Goyle aren't the smartest 'apples' in ANY bunch. Or at least, not for the purposes of this story.

We shall have Harry's response in the next chapter, dear. You're quite right, he definitely has a crush on her. Poor Harry, I hope he will survive. I've got a feeling that he will, though. Hm... maybe Jayde's friends will find out, maybe they won't. Who knows??! (Oh yeah, that's right - I do!) :P


I'm in the process of writing the next chapter now, and I can not WAIT to see what you think of it! Thank you so, SO SO much for your lengthy and thoughtful review. You have NO idea how awesome you've made me feel!





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