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Review:Beeezie says:
Hey! I am here to review, in part because I like you and in part to thank you for all your hard work during secret santas. :)

This was a really good first chapter. I thought that you did a great job at showing the dynamic between Scorpius and the other characters who appeared - I got the tension that exists between Scorpius and his father, as well as Albus and Lily's affection for him (and that they had no idea that he was coming). The only thing I would suggest is that you could have been a little better at is contextualizing it - while leaving things open in a first chapter is great because it piques people's curiosity and keeps them reading, I wanted a tiny bit more information about what was going on between Scorpius and his father.

Other than that, though, this was great! :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the reviews :D

I'm glad you liked this. Mainly this was just aiming to set the scene of him leaving, but nothing else much, that's all to come. Although I take what you say on board, a bit more information could improve this!:)

Thanks again! :)

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