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Review:CambAngst says:
You know, it's coming back to me... I read this chapter once before and I didn't review it. My sincere apologies!

So I'm tagging you from the Review the Person Above You thread and I am reviewing this well and properly this time.

The idea for this story is amazing. It's just wonderful to imagine Harry and Neville both having this avenue into the lives of the parents they never to to know. It offers insight and a connection and closure. In a word, it's magical.

I thought that Harry, Ginny and Neville were all very believable and in character. Neville coming into his own, but still being slightly deferential to Harry and a bit unsure of himself. Ginny being so patient with Harry, being there to listen, but almost making sure that he listens to his own feelings. And Harry, still tortured by all that he's been through yet unwilling to let his friends down by showing weakness. You did a great job of taking all three of them into the days and weeks following the battle.

I guess if there was one thing I found a little off, it would be the goblins' "retribution" against Harry. It seemed kind of pointless, as if to say, "OK, we're going to torment you for a few seconds... Ah, there you go, on about your business. Thanks for banking at Gringotts!" I would have found that part more purposeful if they had actually demanded something from him, like restitution for the damage.

Anyway, terrific start to your story. I may get weak and have to read and review chapter 2, even though I'm at work!

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