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Review:Elenia says:
Hi!

So many things I liked about this story!

Firstly Minerva/Tom, a 'ship that I simply adore. I think they could have been amazing together if only he wasn't so obsessed with his beliefs. I've always wanted to write a fic about them but never actually dared to stir that cauldron. Maybe one day! Until then I'll keep reading amazing stories like this one!

I liked the courtroom theme very much and the fact that she told firmly about what had happened. She didn't show embarrasment even though the court was certainly expecting that. Minerva was true to her character. It was nice to see her tender side, something you don't so often see. She is such a harsh lady, but there has to be something that has made her the way she is and this story is a very good example of what could have happened.

I would have liked to read more about their story, but I think this was just an appropriate amount to be told in a courtroom. They don't need to know every single detail, just get the bigger picture.

In my head Voldemort could never truly love anybody, not even when he was just Tom Riddle, but it was still nice to read about his softer side too. You did make it very beliavable anyways!

I liked the ending very much, I think it was the best part of the story. Even though she loved him there are just things you could never forgive, and he chose to take that path by killing her mother.

I think the quote fit perfectly in the end, it just tied everything together.

Very good work!

Author's Response: Hi!
Thanks for such a speedy review :D *hug*

Finally someone who loves Tom/Minerva! Almost everyone else who reads my stories are so skeptical about them. You should write a story about them! It would be amazing :D

Thank you. I was so worried about the courtroom theme because its so basic and I've never attempted anything so blunt before.
I'm glad you saw that it was supposed to biased, because some people are saying that it could do with more description and more insight from Tom.

Oh good, I'm glad the ending was good. I was so worried about it!!
Thank you for such an amazing review! I'll defiantly be popping back in another time for another review!
Jaz x


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