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Review:Snapdragons says:
-pouts- I wanted first review. But I'm mostly just happy that I found this story because YAY I get more Adelaide! Winning.

Not to mention more Georgia, who I had been missing most terribly. She and Adelaide are just about the best pair ever. They've got such an awesome dynamic - everything they say just seems so real, and I can totally picture two of my friends happily bickering away like those two.

Also there is Henry and that makes me happy because oh man, I like Henry. He's awesome.

(Also, might be off my rocker, but I'm pretty sure said school where Ella's going is mentioned in the Thinkery. Yes? No? Maybe so?)

This chapter had this perfect balance of wistful reflection and friendly banter. It's sort of sad to think this could be one of the last times that they're all together at once... but I guess that's part of growing up.

Love this beginning. Already love this story. I can't wait for more - as soon as I saw this, I got so excited. And then when I finished reading it, it felt like I had come home. ♥ HOORAY FOR MORE ADELAIDE!

Author's Response: Whoo! I'm so glad you're back!

I've missed Georgia as well. I'm actually really sad I have to split those two up and send them off with their boyfriends instead of each other. They bicker away like I do with my friends :P

Henry is pretty awesome. I look forward to writing more Awesome Henry.

You're not off your rocker! Good spotting, the European University of Sorcery is the one featured in The Thinkery! As far as I'm concerned, that place is now canon.

It is sad that it could be the last time they're together as a group - I never realised how much I loved them being a group until I decided to split them up. I'm horrible.

I'm glad you enjoyed it, and you're back, and you're looking forward to the update! I'll try and get another chapter out before I begin my Epic Homeward Bound Journey (getting from my little town in Japan to my little town in NZ takes a while, y'see) and look forward to seeing you back :)


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