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Review:Dark Whisper says:
Heir,
Yet another awesome chapter.

I really love the details that you put into this... 'snow covered stones dug into his knees.' Great details easily make me see where he is and what he is doing.

I can tell he is a hottie in those Armani sunglasses. He has seen a lot over the years and I think it interesting that he is loving the modern way of life.

Once you mentioned that he had several names over the years, it was easy for me to understand that Simon was Tristan. I think you did that very well.

I love your storyline that injects interest... He is going home to Hogsmeade? Very interesting tie to HP. And perhaps the best detail was that he is collecting them as a 'means to an end.'

The encounter with the woman was written really well too. Telling her to relax as he bit into her... that thing vampires do that make them ooze romance. Good job.

I love were you are going with this, Heir. Your blog reminded me to come back and check this story and I'm so glad that I did.

Keep going. I must know how this ends.

10/10
Dark Whisper

P.S. Awesome banner.

Author's Response: Dark Whisper,
Thank you!

Details and descriptions are not really my strong points, but I'm getting there. I think it's showing. :D

LOL. Yeah, he is very accepting of the modern world. Technology and clothes; they're his favorites. :P

Thanks. I'm glad I made it easy to understand in the chapter. I just didn't want people to be confused. :)

He's going home to the UK. What he thought of as home is near Hogsmeade (*wink*) and his real home, his old house, is further down south. He has to meet Roxanne somehow. ;)
Yes, a means to an end. You'll find out what that is as the story progresses. He needs the stones, but he doesn't want them...

Oh, yay. You do, you just want to love them and have them love you.

Really? Awesome! I replied on the blog that C2 was up.

Now, because of you and this amazing review, To Die For has become a priority fic and I started chapter 3 this morning. Just for you. :D

Thank you so much!

Heir.

P.S. Thank you, I love the banner!


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